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One way to create a good hook is to use the multiple problem strategy.
Raiders of the Lost Ark isn't just about finding the Ark, it's also about Indy overcoming his tendency to always lose to Belloq, which is made clear right at the very beginning, "anything you possess, I can easily take away."
Make the inner and outer problems evident right at the beginning.
Read the 2000+ stage Hero's Journey/Transformation/New World, which you can purchase from http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html