#screenwriting #filmmaking #writing #screenplay
One suggestion is to open the story with the problem.
In The 40 Year Old Virgin (2005), we immediately see that Andy is alone, anal retentive etc...that he needs to get laid, loosen up, let go.
In Lord of the Rings (2001), we immediately see that Sauron is the problem.
Read the 2000+ stage Hero's Journey/Transformation/New World, which you can purchase from http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html